Soft exhales,
warm caresses,
together.
Author notes
Prompt: Love
5 words only
A contest entry
- Five Words Of Wonder by piccola.
400 points, ended February 14, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
Comments
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beautiful. so much can be said with so few words. Thank you for entering
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The sweet surrender of love....To lie in that embrace and feel the warmth of your lover's breath cascade over tender flesh!! Just lovely in its sensuality! Well done and best wishes


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very nice
Is it warm in here? I think this could melt a heart! Good luck in the contest! The Shaker -
this is beautiful, perfect for just five words..
good luck
kat


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You manage to unite ... beautifully drawn piece
Best wishes and good luck
Julie
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Winner!
Trophy!!!! You sure got me beat! Paints a great pix. All the best...

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Lovely!
KW~

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