In your silence...
Deafening whispers from my mirage are screaming
I, thinking of the concrete uncertainty of "us"
because my intuition is incapable of reading your thoughts
that are hurriedly escaping from me
Blood from my swollen heart is breaking out
Feeling the euphoric pain caused by
the love i willingly offer you
Echoes of my imprisonment
from the absurdity of loving you are wailing
but i already acknowledge that the four corners of your heart
is a jail that has become my sanctuary
In your silence...
Concrete uncertainty of "us" emerges
Euphoric pain of loving you intensifies
Residing in the prison of your love becomes beyond admissible
In your silence
I hope someday you'll break it
even through a whisper
saying...
You love me still.
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Sol-luna
In your silence...
A contest entry
- Heartbreak by Puking Faerie Dust.
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It is almost too surreal to think that something as revered and praised throughout history can feel like the utmost absolute worst thing.
When love hurts, you know the world is wrong.
(or so it feels to me)
Amazing writting and form you've constructed with this piece.
-cheers
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