Nauseous candy fumes
stuffed with cotton and some more
commercialised feats.
Did we all forget
This was for some long-ago
saint lost in his time?
True, love is alive
but not truly as cherished
As those bright candies.
Author notes
Yes I love Valentines day but people have lost its meaning from time to time!
This is a sieries of Haikus.
A contest entry
- Come! Amazing promts! Plus any Valentines day Poem! (pics. words. ect....) by Rain Soaked Rose.
605 points, ended April 13, 2009, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I liked it a lot! I haven't lost sight of Valentines day it's about speadning time with you love... but me baeing younge and loveless I don't notice This holiday as much as some but I still love it!
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