She sits by the sink in
the bathroom. I can't
do this life anymore.
I can't live this life full
of lies she thinks.
Slowly putting the razor
to her wrist. Tears
streaming down her
cheeks. as she slides
the razor across her
awaiting wrist. She lets
the tears fall onto the
fresh mark she made.
I can't do this.
She thinks as
she took the
gun from under
her bed. She
looked down at
her wrists.
Slowly raising the
gun to her head. Her
finger rests on the
trigger. Ready
to pull it she drops
it to the floor.
She slits her wrists
again and this time
she takes her finger
and writes on her pure
white wall:
"I can't do this. I
Can't live in this
life full of lies. It's
my time to go.Good
Bye forever"
I can't do this.
She slowly raises
the gun to her
head again.Pulled
the trigger. Falls to the floor.
Her last words were"I can't
Do this".
Author notes
Option number 3 ( 
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This poem discrides how I feelt for along time
But I am still get over it slowly.
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Very Emo. I'm feeling the emotion. Nicely done.
Thanks for entering my contest, and good luck. -
This is an amazing poem. i loved how the repetition added to the poem. grat work.
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this is very sad, but a great write. i liked it.
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Hi, just wondering, what prompt did you use for my contest?
Thanks for answering. is the prompt (just to remind myself)
It was very sad and slightly depressing, but I liked it. Great job. -
Wow, this was very touching. Thank you for entering.
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wow i've been where you are ...or were. this is so sad and touching because i've been there. i loved this poem and these lines especially
Slowly putting the razor
to her wrist. Tears
streaming down her
cheeks. as she slides
the razor across her
awaiting wrist. She lets
the tears fall onto the
fresh mark she made.
wow ...good luck! hope you will pull through -
wish i was strong enough to raise a gun to my head and pull the trigge
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sad
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