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Take the Bus

Take the Bus


Curves for comfort
Down like a pillow
Cool and temporary
Bending like willow
Wasn't mean to stay
Many other’s fill the page
Skoshe more than throw away
Good old reliable
She’ll be there
Didn’t care… as I did
Thought we was people
More cohesive

Smile through sessions
While you played
Sittin fan below stage
Danced around
Spit mystic sage
Created the sound
Was a must

Cause before I land I’ll take the bus

Won’t be cursed
to second hand
Work to be ignored
Edge sweat off chin
You sitting bored
Not them tasty people
savored for dessert
Cheaper to sweep'em
Ain’t no way
I’m jettin first
Hang like leftovers
from yesterday?
Loved to love you
Pay for pay

Mesmerized crowds
Screaming O's
Guru with a steady flow
Spinning yarns
Gifted charms
Unchained and mellow
Verbal massah, wreaking disaster
on ambient
Cream whipped with blues
Grown full of yourself
All that’s left is you


Smile through seasons
While you played
Sittin fan below stage
Danced around
Created the sound
Spit mystic sage
Loved to love you
while it was paid
Way things are
couldn’t have stayed
So I’m gone boo
Too much fuss


Cause before I land I’ll take the bus




Mandika'sLine@2009

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  • dannyjay
    February 18, 2009
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    wow

    i read this twice. i fell in love with this piece. words sang to me. sometimes we gotta haul-ass


  • tomisb silver member
    February 12, 2009

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    Ride by the corner of Farmington and Edgehill and sit for awhile on the porch with me while we dance with words about all that can be seen. You catch a rythmn and bring music to your words. You make this reader feel you talking to him all about another who couldn't quite hold the strap to handle the ride. There is always another bus if you got the time. But something tells me no matter which one you catch, you will do just fine.
    Love, Tom B.