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There is a wonderful thing called Spring

Feel the light and the sun,
be on your skin, truly done
and gone is the rain from the day!
And be it now a true stay
for the wonderful light
that shines through the trees, truly bright
giving me a taste for my pen and sketchbook
while I sit beyond the deeped watered brook.
Little birdies fly and fly by my sight,
singing a song jovially in their flight.
And I am truly happy that it is spring beside me,
where my imagination runs far and free,
as well as my creativity and my flaring dignity
while I paint it in water colors the following week,
down beside the brook, this time a creek.
The water runs smoothly and with a musical chime,
and with the bird's song, detailing that it's spring time.
And that is why I love the spring,
because it displays nature's wondrous ring
and the beauty of it, which is better than anything...!

Author notes

I'm just waiting for the right time of the year - Spring, when it isn't too hot or too cold (which is what's going on in my state). ^_^ Besides, I feel kind of positive today! So tell me what you want to say?

Thank you!

A person in need of comments someday...
~Meli♥

^_^ I believe I've succeeded, but will you tell me the errors that I repeated?

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