When I think of my first kiss,
It's you that I shared it with.
Baby, I may be miles away,
But I miss you with every passing day!
We may be through,
And that was your fault,
But I miss you!
When I think of the past year and a half,
I think of how many tears I've cried,
And why I can't forget you!
You were my fist true love,
And I miss the way you held me close,
The way you kissed me smoothly,
The way I felt all fuzzy inside, when you were around,
And I miss being told that I was crazy,
That you were no good!
That I deserved better,
But wat I miss most is our love,
I miss you everytime I look back on the past,
Because you're write there,
Reminding me that I can't have you back!!
I miss you more than words can say!!
Author notes
Dedicated to my ex I love him but he cheated twice and I just cn't forgive him for it!! I even keep trying to forget but it's hard bcuz I look at my contacts in my phone and pass his name!! It hurts everyday that he doesn't call!!!
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- I MISS YOU!!! by Temptation..
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OmG!!dIs MaDe Me tEaR uP!!dA wHoLe TiMe I rEaD iT i ThOuGhT bOuT mY eX!!hE wAs AlSo My 1St LuV!!n DaMn I kAn ReLaTe 2DiS sOo mUcH!!It wAs A gReAt PoEm!!i lUvD eVeRy WoRd!!
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Heart felt!
I kept thinking all the way through this poem, " Go get him!" But then I read your Author Notes and what a bummer! Sounds like you truly loved this person and they totally let you down! What a hard place to be. I could really feel the love and conflict in your poem.
Great read!
Great write!
Annette
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cheating can never be forgotten. you can forgive eventually... i know how you feel. i married my love and he cheated on me with a 15 year old. he could hold my hand while i was having his son but sit next to me the entire time texting her saying i love you and i miss you. its hard. we still talk, but it kills me to do so. talking is no better then the silence. the sound of his voice will just remind you of the past. sorry this is long. but thanks for entering and good luck.
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