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Lucky

I feel that this happiness
this feeling I don't deserve.
A swirl,
a twirl.
A high point among low.
I don't want my smile to end,
just keep coming more and more.

The broadness of the world,
of which I am merely a tiny point
among all the sadness...

  Everyones depressed,
cutting,
bleeding,
sobbing,
hurting,
while I stand aside and watch
not wanting this smile to end.

  I know so many,
lost and depressed.
Sad as it is,
I get sick of it sometimes...
the constant self-pity,
furrowed brow and clenched fist.

  Wanting
needing,
attention,
advice and care.

  I want to help,
but I'm just one small piece.
And I can't do it all.

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Sad I suppose.

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  • Emotional-wreck
    February 12

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    Everyones depressed,
    cutting,
    bleeding,
    sobbing,
    hurting,
    while I stand aside and watch
    not wanting this smile to end.

    deep emotions there. Please put option in an thank you
    Good luck!