There is a place,
quiet and small,
calm and green.
For me,
this place hold love,
this place hold life,
this place holds dealth.
My Calm Place,
my shelter,
my heaven,
my home.
The nature is bright,
the water sways.
This is my calm place,
this is my soul.
A contest entry
- Believers only.....Picture Prompt........No bashing Religion..... by echo-ink.
700 points, ended March 2, 16 entries
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Comments
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So young and that makes me excited for your generation to have you write something like this from your heart. I just wonder daer if in the 4th line you wanted the word death or depth. Keep declaring these beautiful words. Blessings.
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This was a cute little diddy.
I really liked the last line:
this is my soul.
I like nothing better than a surprise ending.
very clever...you,
Thanks so much for entering this.
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