Maybe...
In a few decades
If I ever come to terms with what you have done...
I will forgive you
Maybe...
When I forget the inevitable pain
If I give you the answers to my suffering...
I will forgive you
Maybe...
I will never forgive you.
A contest entry
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Comments
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I do indeed hope that this is just a poem on sadness Spock, and that no one has inficted such pain on you as to truly feel this way. This is poem is very succinct. That's the beauty of it. You do not need to say alot to make your point, which you did very well. Great content and word choice. Thank you for entering. Best of luck!
Ocean.
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i like it... its nice.
and i've felt that way before.
:]
best of luck in my contest -
wooooooooooooooooow
I'm sad you have to feel that much pain. i wish i could help make it better, but i can't. i can only smile at you and hope that you catch a bit of my happiness.
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It is sad, being so young and having a battle with forgiveness. I am glad God helps me to always forgive. Though it doesn't mean everything is restored. Good luck.
little sam
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