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Embraces Of The Heart Save The Children

We know not the angels about us,
unless we take their hands.
There to guide us through hard times,
and see us live again.

They may be brown white  red or black,
but the hearts are all the same.
Did you see the angels about you,
on this very day.

Children see not in colors,
unless they are taught to do so.
So why would we shun another,
when we all have the same goals.

Feel the embraces from afar,
feel the love so shared.
And we know not of the other person,
for their colors we aren't aware.

It is the feelings we get when we visit,
and the love we so share.
Tell me would it change how you feel,
if their color became aware.

Time to live, love and laugh,
let no one go astray.
For their are many so left behind
hurting today.
Be the adults with compassion,
and bring our countries spirit home.
And know to save it and keep it free,
love has to be in the lead you know.

Get to know your neighbor ,
treat him as you would want him to treat you.
And learn the goal we so seek,
is the same in all we do.

Embrace life and all those near,
and know together we are the key.
Then our children instead of hearing gunfire,
will be blessed with life where love can be seen.

Author notes

Look around and tell me what part of this do you play are you a drinker or a stinker or just throwing your life away . Expecting those who care and share to foot the bill tell me which is worse color or a person that has no will . For the working people they arent fighting too busy dont you see and fending for you and them,selves leaves them little indeed .Its time we all do our share and if you refuse then I think they should group you as one . To fight and steal and hate one another beneath the sun . An island for the damed a place where hate verses hate and in the end when no one is left I ask you this day would you change if we voted this way . I have seen people work harder to steel from others than they would work if they had a job . I have seen grown people steal from a child and laugh and think it was great . Bullies of today times are changing indeed and our prisons are overflowing over their banks you see .So tell me when you get out and go right back to yourself and cost the taxpayers more .What do you think is going through their mind indeed paying for those too stupid to learn for sure .
But they arent stupid their just lazy refusig to lift a hand so off to the island I say to you where with others like you shall stand .No bars no notheing just sand and trees tell me once the tables are turned no longer blind indeed . You wont have the innocent to steel from and brother hear me now for the first time you steel from a steeler you will be the one taken now . Its pathetic our prisons are so over filled in a country that they say has the best schooling and law . Hello did a whole generation go totally bonkers a complete generation of idiots unable to learn whats happened here in our country that they choose drugs and gangs over the good life . It comes from parents uncaring of their young homes of abuse and neglect never teaching the meaning of doing your share and a days work makes the man and gives him the character he so has within . Untaught uncaring to harm someone who worked hard for what they have and you just waltz in and steal it and hurt or kill them for it .To me this is inhumane no excuse for it and the punishment should be for the new generation being raised today the children taught respect and care for one another . To teach what harm gossip causes and know how it feels to be the one on the bottom end .Teach the kids to work together and the ones who totally refuses to leaarn and be a part of it enroll them into a military school where they learn how to do what others say and to not harm others . To have the ones who can control them untill they get it and can be loving citizens 0.More often they dont know how to be good for most their life they were abused and no one came to their rescue .We have thousands of young today being taught this way .Its time to stop for the parents to grow up and get rid of the drugs and bring this country back to order for if the drugs aren't stopped now, this country won't have the sparkle or the freedom we once knew, this country will be overcome by drugs from people like you ..

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  • movedon
    February 22, 2009

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    I am almost at a loss as to what to even say!! Your words flow from your heart and soul, radiating with love. Amazing..absolutely amazing


  • Dead creature
    February 20, 2009

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    Wow!! awesome words
    you wrote this is deep

    how long did it take you
    to write this wonderful
    poem?? Its very good!
    keep it up!


  • SimplyNoodle
    February 13, 2009

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    Very nicley done my dear Patty, Really shows poeple a very specific point, good job. Keep it up, luv' ya!!
    ~ Chelsey

  • goalsv
    February 13, 2009
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    Very good write, a poem to make us all take notice.


  • maralisa silver member
    February 12, 2009
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    bravo a brilllant poem patty thank you for sharing maralisa

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