Vast as the sky, white as clouds,
you memory calls so far, so loud.
In each flit of hummingbird wings,
within each song the robin sings.
Everywhere that I look I can see,
a part of you still here with me.
No matter the season you remain,
seen in shadow, felt in spring rain.
Haunting upon darkness of night,
beckon me as moon takes flight.
Two breath upon the mirror I see,
feel your warmth here aside of me.
Close my eyes, my mind reveals,
memories flashing, feels so real.
Linger in my heart much too long,
play on and on oh sad love song.
No where to escape nor to hide,
can not out run my feelings inside
Where ever I may go or what I do,
my thoughts come back to you.
Author notes
Picture is contest prompt.
In a list
A contest entry
- HERE AND THERE I REMEMBER YOU by Swan song.
800 points, ended February 25, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Precious~~
Aaaaaaaaw Bless Your Heart Sandy and this is a Gem of a verse penned
Sorry it took me awhile to comment for I was offline- and working through notes now~ Powerful verse and tight rhyme which You are so good at~ this swells the eyes and message tugs hard at the Hearstrings- pulls the Reader closer to inhale its Beauty
Bravo
Congratulations on Your HM!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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well done You could almost sing this
Nice entry
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Excellent
A very fine write, and tribute. Your warmth comes shining through. Thanks for sharing this one with us. -
Every single word - beautiful Sheila
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Thank You
Always a pleasure when you stop and read. Thank you for the nice comment. Bless You, Sandy
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These are tresured thoughts
Oh the many more we can all to them...mac
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Good Morning Mac
Your coment brings a smile. Always nice to hear from you. Stay safe and warm in Ohio. Sending hugs and smiles dear friend.
Blessings,
Sandy
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This piece tugs at the heart
Very well written with a brilliant flow
I can relate so much to this piece...you know why my good friend.
You have written feelings that are in my heart
These words ring out loud in my soul
"No where to escape nor to hide,
can not out run my feelings inside
Where ever I may go or what I do,
my thoughts come back to you."
Wish you the best in the contest
Much love and many blessings
David
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Hello My Friend
Your comment touches my heart. Thank you for reading. I do know what you are going through and my thoughts and prayers are with you. Why something as beautiful as love has to hurt too, I will never understand. Bless you and may you find strength in each other. Hugs and Smiles.
Always. Sandy
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