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s.e.c.r.e.t.s

Everytime I go to sleep I feel like I missed something important

It's been over a year since I've seen or talked to my best friend in the whole world, and sometimes I'm afraid that when he comes back from Iraq he won't be the same person

I sometimes wish I could get into an accident just so I won't have to kill myself

When my dad died I felt like I the one person in the world who didn't judge me

I've stolen prescription pills just to get through a work day

I've drank an entire fifth of vodka and drove home

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Bleh....I feel all like weird and stuff...ick

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  • endless-lover silver member
    2 days ago
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    this one was a little short but had such powerful words :/
    a-m,-a-z-i-n-g dollie!!!! :]
    i can relate in ways to the poem all in all.
    you layed it out good and let us feel alittl4e of your pain inside
    keep it up your loved mucho

    -vanna

  • When my dad died I felt like I the one person in the world who didn't judge me
    im sorry you lost you dad i liked this poem
    I have a question:whats a fifth of vodka?

  • Sorry I wasnt there for you.

  • Third one. I sometimes feel the same way.


  • SceneQueen
    February 12

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    I really like these, so full of emtion and it sounds like there might be some regret, thanks and good luck

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