When the Goddess sways,
I can’t count the days
of my happiness,
because it all begins again;
a beauty the sun engraves,
when she hears the waves
and she’s singing,
I hope it never ends.
New seeded love in bloom,
we can’t caress too soon
as winter ends
and the mornings lengthen;
in the fields of rye,
where I first caught your eye
is where I worship,
I await your harvest.
The sky is tattooed blue,
it all belongs to you
with a whisper,
even the winds are sighing;
the world bent round,
because it heard the sound
of your laughter,
now it’s yours forever.
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Chosen Prompt: Picture Prompt C
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: The Goddess Sways (As The Sun Engraves)
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times~ I am Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for my contest You took the prompt and ran with it~ Bravo!!
When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~ I have to say- when I read Your words~
'The sky is tattooed blue' - images filled my Mind and for some reason I kept seeing a vase- but it appeared like a cobalt blue with swirls of clear windows (I call them windows)
it is crystal- and I'm unable to spell the name I'm seeing: Swarovski- me thinks- also reference to tulips- shown them- and a man herding his cattle- but not like on a farm in the US- outside the US like in Mongolia- starts with M- dress is similar- so me thinks Mongolia- while reading- I kept being shown what appears to be parchment- and reference to sanskrit- male with fur cap - writing at candlelight- with feathered quill- now seems- reference to YOU- hearing Northern Star- Tight rhyme also
Hopefully my words make some sense
Powerful verse and message You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled-
The sky is tattooed blue,
it all belongs to you
with a whisper,
Emotional Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit
also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
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Many blessings too
with much love and light~ Desire~*~
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