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not beautiful enough to be beautiful

You let someone tell you you're not good enough
so now you put down the way you look
& no one corrects what they don't see as wrong
& words that sound false help anyone at all
you're vision of perfection is focused on just one
perhaps no one gives you as much as you need, love
no one see's the worth that is hidden from you
you let yourself dream of their perfectyou
is there no hope for the girls of today
no way for themselves, perfection to escape.

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