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Heavenly Stairwell

Gift of God
Lamb of Heaven,
I have walked the earth you've bestown
To see the wonders you have shown
Dear God, I've praised your name

My Father in your Heavenly kingdom
I see this path lain here
And to your side I shall reside
Heaven's stairwell, I see clear

Bless thee, God,
For all the beauty on the Earth
With a path of imperfection
So once Heaven calls
We shall know

Perfection

You bless us with the first sight
Of a stairwell to heaven,
Waters flowing, to say goodbye
And to welcome

Perfection

Author notes

I see this picture with it's beauty, as the stairwell to the most perfect of perfects. Thank you so much for gracing us with this picture.

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  • Denerica
    February 16

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    Beautiful and heartfelt words...a prayer in a sense as well to what your eye sees and what your heart knows. Blessings.


  • echo-ink
    February 12
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    Beautifully written, ..really lovely and from the heart.


  • Samplette gold member
    February 12

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    To see Perfection is my heart's desire. I seek His face with all my heart. This is a beautiful piece of poetry. Goes very well with the picture. Best to you in the contest.
    Sam