sweet breezes play with my hair,my hair flies with the violent winds
though this boat moves so slowly,drifting on the clear blue mass
On this sea I travel, a busy town awaits my arrival cheery blossoms too
sounds of the city match my heart beat,and linger through my mind,this is a dream
come true.Japan,your in my thoughts and in my ears and now finally I am here.
Author notes
i wish i could go to tokyooo
A contest entry
- Cruise Contest Rounds by Riftkin.
700 points, ended February 15, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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me 2 on the AN
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Haha Seoul is better! jk. I hope one day you can really go there for as long as you like.
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This sounds like a wonderful trip.
I think I would like to go on one like this.
A trip to Japan would be something new for me.
Riftkin
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