[touch] me
I can feel you resting sweet kisses upon my cheek
[Hear] me
I can hear the sound of your voice whispering a song of comfort in my ear
[taste] me
I can taste your desires as you kiss me again
[smell]me
I can smell your breath upon my skin
[see] US
I can see, now, that out love outshines even the sun
Author notes
PROMT:A. Our love outshines the sun.
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie.. by Riftkin.
775 points, ended February 12, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I love it ^.^ So cute. I love the quote, it is a good quote
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Such a great way to express the five senses.
I like how you did this.
Riftkin
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SImply beautiful! I love the format that you wrote this one in. I hope that you do well with it here. Good luck and thanks for sharing it!
Jeremy0826
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