those foiled pinwheels
wrapped cleverly-
blown into spinning waifs
of dizzying breath
leaving colored casts of
light upon painted walls
chased after by playful kittens
sun sweeps in diffused
by lined reflection 'pon floors
dust clouds its array
unmitigated by chairs-
tables stand indifferent
collecting the faded memory
of the sun hiding
behind a cumulus cloud
nimbus glow- a lullaby
lures the heart to rest.
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your command of language is a romantic dance that spills from your pen...great writing...thank you for sharing...peace an dlight, kp
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Awesome job here! I love the way you incorporated cloud type names into this one. (Nimbus, cumulus, etc.) Awesome write! Thanks so much for the sahre!
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I love the way you write. You have a wonderful vocabulary and use it to great advantage. Always a pleasure to read your work and it's great to have you back.
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really cool. great descriptions but i think you could play with the backrounds a little more. make it a bit more colorfull
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a beautiful poem I love your imagery throughout thank you for sharing
maralisa
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