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Amor Boquiabierto

Amor efervescente
El brillar intensamente, chispeando
Una epifanía
Perfecto romántico
Incorpore una canción
Luz corta, vista dulce
Ofrecimiento de se
Voto por siempre
Terminación en un beso



Effervescent love
Glowing, sparkling
An epiphany
Perfect romance
Embody a song
Low light, sweet sight
Offering of oneself
Vow forever
Ending on a kiss

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  • Note The Sarcasm
    February 12

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    This was awesome. I actually think I was able to read it okay-ish. But I can say that I for sure wouldn't read it very well, compared to, well, pretty much anyone. Is this Spanish? I loved the sweet simplicity of this. Great write!