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Poor Teardrop

One single tear rolls down my face,
It doesn't know just what to do.
It's so confused and so unsure,
Completely lost now without you.
Slowly falling ever downward,
softly slipping to the floor,
Feeling lonely and abandoned
Poor teardrop ...

Let me cry some more

Author notes

option 4 my own poem that I like

A contest entry

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  • LonelyAngel
    August 27

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    this would have been nicer to describe more and read a bit extra. It is a good idea for a poem, and could be made even better. It was an overall good write, so well done.

    Thanks,
    Good luck.

    xYx


  • T.o.r.t.u.r.e. gold member
    March 28

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    • if you would please space your name out in your AN like this : X x D r o w n . M e . D r y X x . Just out a space between each of your letters. Please. If you chose not to thats fine but i would like you you give me a reason.


  • Captain Jenny
    March 23
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    This is amazing. Short and swet with such a nice flow and rhyme. Thanks for entering

    ~Lae

  • starving-to-survive
    February 12

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    This is brilliant i love this, i can relate to it so well. I am so sorry for the pain you are feeling. I know exactlu what you are going through. keep up the good work, and if you ever need to talk i am here

  • maggy1126
    February 12
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    awww.. how sad... I really enjoyed reading it...

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