I put myself out there and gave it my all
I tried to impress you
I tried to have hope
But it seems now all the hope I had
You smashed
I might as well have ripped my heart out
and left it on a plater
with a note that says "Destroy"
Or maybe that's what I did
by telling you my secrets
and getting close to you
Hanging out
and cherishing every word
that left your mouth
I didn't want you to break my heart
Though It seems
I was asking for it
but I do not regret
Falling in love with you
was no mistake
Listening to you pour you secrets to me
not a mistake
Giving my all to get to know you
I do not regret
My advice to you if you love someone
is go for it, and if it turns out bad
the one thing you should remember
is "At least i tried"
Author notes
This is something I wrote in my Creative WRiting journal for school. The prompt for that day was "This is how my heart was Broken" I like it,sorta.
I hope you love it
<3 peace
A contest entry
- Valentines Day King/Queen by ButterFlyMoons.
700 points, ended February 21, 2009, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Hmmm...!One needs a tough heart to love or else sufferance is always knocking at doors...! I like your poem, it's well-written...!
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Thank you so much ♥ I appreciate you comments!
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Bravo
I really like this one you write with feeling and that is the best ting you can use when it comes to writing
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I read this already yay!
Its really good It starts off pretty sad but I like the ending
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