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Black blood
below the stones,
empty altars
await with mudstains
on windshields,
velcro songs
over dashboards
and acid rains.

Single drops
for The great wheel
that never stops,
until graveyards dry.

Hear the wind,
see the air
caressing
silently steel.

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  • cubert
    February 17

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    A world without oil....it may be pandemonium at first, but I can only think it would be a good thing in the end. No more separate entities in motorised tin cans. The more advanced we get, the further we are from one another and sometimes ourselves.

    We have already talked about this, but it's too good to sit here without a comment!


    • Tecolote
      February 18

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      Hee!..as Reverend Palmer Joss character from Carl Sagan's Contact novel said...are we truly happier because of technology? I guess it would be interesting if you could migrate again to the organization by family-cells, where families themselves pretty much were able to work and self-mantain with just a necessary amount of technology without becoming to highly especialized and complex, since it's this complexity that requires more systems, subsystems and people-that-know-how-to-operate them which then is pretty much bringing us to a brink of a big change...thanks for stopping by