Two souls have fallen
To the bottom of desperation
Grasping and pulling up for air
Eyes filled with sadness, bodies bare
Bodies held tightly
Together pressed
The two souls collide as one
Breaking free, from falling farther
Lips pressed gently
Breathing sweet life into one another
Reaching farther hands touched air
Farther they slip from each other
The decision to fade away
They slipped into the abyss
Together held bare there love
For one another
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt- I WANT CREATIVITY!! by edens-envy.
850 points, ended February 19, 2009, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice write. Your take on this picture was great to read. Congrats on the HM...
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I rather enjoyed this take on the prompt. It is sweet and romantic. However, in the last stanza, a-bis should be abyss. If you were trying to do an abbreviation of the word or something, then it really doesn't go with the poem.
Thanks for entering and best of luck in my contest!
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