Silver shadows
A-Mist; In the night
Shining light glares through my window
Appears shadows
Gleaming eyes of creatures
Stalking the grounds beneath
Covered in sheets
With nothing under
Bare as my birth had been
Creeping steps a-bid my wait
Outside my door I had heard
Gasped; In silent I hid
Goosebumps embedded inside me
As if they had been frightened as well
It becomes irritable
I sit in slumber, awake
With all awareness around me
I hear of voices in my head
Calling me to come out
Cold, gentle hands rest on my shoulder
My hair gently pushed aside
Breath running down my neck
I can feel it subside; sink
Beneath my skin
Feeling hunger for more
My body quarrels with passion
The sheets fall completely off
I've awaken new; immortal
Author notes
"I can't believe that I've lived through this!"
I know you wanted dark dark, you like vampires, I tried my best I hope I gave you
Some good imagery.
Img link= http://hatefelt.deviantart.com/art/Vampire-Birth-v2-1344873
A contest entry
- Dark...We'll see what happens! by PsychoAnalysis.
1200 points, ended February 26, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you!, That's what I like to hear actually. I enjoyed your contest though, cause I normally don't write about vampires so I wasn't sure if you'd like it. Thanks.! =]
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Dark and vivid...it's cool and cold....keep it up!
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Beautiful poem. Very dark, and wonderful imagery! I think you did very well on this, and you met my needs! haha! Best of luck in my contest!
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