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Solage # 2

Never go shopping on an empty stomach, I say
you may end up with an empty wallet, to dismay
------indulgance

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  • suseann
    February 13
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    I know that's right! Impulse buying is costly.


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 13
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    Isn't the the utmost truth. Well said.

  • Eusebius
    February 12
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    Now I know what Santa Claus has three gardens: so he can....HO, HO, HO!!! nicely done!

  • A twained mind.
    February 12
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    Ha love it!


    • Tirrell
      February 12
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      Thankyou, but I have changed the sinker to indulgance from Misguided... I still have misgivings on this...

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