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Confusion

Up, down
Endless roller coaster
I shouldn’t be defining this
By a Katy Perry song

What happened to:
Bright Eyes
Say Yes
Jumping each other in public
Just because we could

I know, I know
We’re going on dates
Fucking

But still
What we’re not doing:
Dating

What else we’re not doing:
Commitment
Responsibility
Monogamy

Why:
You’re afraid of commitment
You won’t take responsibility
I’m your safety

The girl you turn to
When it’s all settled
And you’re settling

I guess I was wrong
We’re still Death Cab

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