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A Wonderland in Alice


oh, how i searched for her inequities
such a fruitless, barren quest
i should have focused on her amenities
her complexities, and zest

through my insecurity
i found purity
compassion... sublime!
but the darkness
refused to release me
struggled to render me blind

i heldfast
to the light her soul emitted
and it guided me through the gloom
surrounded me, illuminated me
in an effervescent, Angelic cocoon

i dont know
if she knew
she did this

im just glad
that it was done

now i see her for who she is
a Blessed Goddess of the Sun

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  • FaeRae gold member
    April 19

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    I love everything that speaks of, or mentions the Goddess or Goddesses, to you got me right there. The rest of the poem is quite amazing as well, and there must be an amazinfg muse behinf this write.
    This was beautiful
    ***Rae***


  • Edie gold member
    February 13

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    Oh! I do like these lines...

    oh, how i searched for her inequities
    such a fruitless, barren quest
    i should have focused on her amenities
    her complexities, and zest