We met one day
on a sunny beach,
though a bit cliche
I was without speech.
He took me to dinner
at a placid place,
his smile, it glittered
when it lit his face.
Then he stared my way
his face intense,
what was he about to say?
the moment filled with suspense.
He looked at me
with his deep blue eyes,
replete with so much beauty
it could make a girl cry.
Sighing, with a tender expression
he knelt upon one knee,
time stood still for new love and a question,
as he boldly spoke, "will you marry me?"
Author notes
Had to use a title of a Robert Frost piece as inspiration for homework.
So that is my prompt.
I chose, "Love and a Question" My piece is nothing like his..
http://www.bartleby.com/117/4.html
A contest entry
- Just for Kids II by oceanbluize.
1850 points, ended March 2, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a beautiful poem Sam, And I am glad to here that Frost is an inspiration to you. I love his poetry as well. Who knows, with time you might emulate Frost himself. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with me Sam, May you find that special boy, like in this poem, and keep poetry alive in your heart.
Good luck.
Ocean.
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That;s really good!! Weldone!
xxx
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awwwwwww omg that's sooooooo amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! extremely welll written!!!!!!!!! very nice!!!!!!
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Wow!
My heart stopped while reading this. Ingenously written! Well done.
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Love the rhyming! It flows so well. Great imagery too. Cute poem, wonderfully written. Good luck in the contest!
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BEAUTIFUL
beautifully written.well done!lovely piece -
I think you did a great job. I enjoyed Robert Frost's "Love and a Question", thanks for adding the link. Keep writing sweetie!
Sam
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that's a beautiful poem.
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