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and so, hearts heal and become a liberated member

 

I was engulfed by longsuffering and found joy in its teachings.

When I could see the story of my heart and its attacks

played out like silver screens, I knew something bigger must be

awaiting my reality, for I did not forsee doom to encroach upon me.

 

And, so, here you came...

 

The chainbreaker, in liberation of love's constant stuggles,

you were Valentine's celebration and my freedom.

All my words lay on the floor, as I was rendered speechless

by your surrender and this forever you spoke of.

 

O' healer,

you took divisions of past and present,

of memories I'd rather surpress,

and stiched them up into hope and everlasting.

 

And I have been awaken to new horizons

and seeing sunrises I'm not so used to.

 

 

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  • nobodys looking
    February 24
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    this is such a touching poem. the ending is amazing!


  • movedon
    February 22

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    Your words are so real. Like "here i am. deal with it" great take on the prompt. shame you didnt place. you should have. i enjoyed reading this


  • XxemohatexX
    February 13
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    wow your great adn yu know it!


  • tiredxofxsunsets
    February 13
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    good job i liked this


  • Sortingthroughlife
    February 12
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    Wow, that's amazing darling.

    Great job!


  • Denerica
    February 12

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    Bravo!

    These words are well written, flowed and I loved the vision of O healer, took the past and present and stitched them to hope and everlasting. Cleverly shared message. Blessings.

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