Cute little nose,
cute little toes.
Smiles big and bright,
worries are past everything will be alright.
Cute little feet,
Cute little sleepy eye, their gaze makes your love concrete.
A cute little nose,
and such cute little toes.
A mothers love shines through,
the gift of a little life, the gift is born anew.
Author notes
Prompt: Seeing your baby for the first time
A contest entry
- BabyNames by xxRainbowDawnxx.
400 points, ended February 20, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Awe...I going to cry. You've captured my attention, and emotions. Excellent job.
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A Miracle For Sure
Good luck in the contest - I like the rhyme and the content - the flow was a little awkward - I was thinking as I was reading this whether it could be written with like "Cute little tossies" etc. just a thought - lol - the word concrete could be replaced with complete - loved it - we had 8 children so I know whereof you speak - Joe -------------------- cheers
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Awww this is so cute, you're right. I know it'll feel so special. I expect I'll be exhausted though, considering.
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OMG i love this... you are so right and you have captured the very moment in which i first saw my now four month old girl!
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aww.. good stuff I've never had a child myself.. but I can't wait to have one...
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Beautiful...takes away the feeling of the birth, when you look at them for the first time, cute sentimental words and flow. Blessings.
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Thanks
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aww this is so sweet! i love it, i can't choose any favorite lines, theyre all beautiful...
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Nice.
Very lovely.
I pictured a cute little one
opening his or her eyes to see everyone.
I like it.
Nicely done.
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thank you!
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