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~Never Let Me Go~

Never let me go.


You already know I love you.
You know you make up a part of me.
You're irriplaceable.
No matter where you are
I feel you are near to me.
I did everything I could to make you see
that you mean everything to me.

Never let me go.


I need you to know,
I need you.
I'd do anything to be with you.

Never let me go.

I want you to see
that you make up not only
the best but the heart in
me.

Author notes

For James

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  • Nyxs Daughter
    February 16

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    Aw....babe. It so sweet and heartfelt. I'm sorry he's gone and that everything seems tough but it'll get better love. Love you sis.


  • August Starlight silver member
    February 12

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    This is so sweet. It reminds me of a poem that my friend wrote for his girlfriend right after they first started dating. They are now engaged. This poem doesn't need to change anything, but you misspelled "irreplaceable." That's the only thing I see that should be changed. This is utterly amazing, keep writing. =]


  • Denerica silver member
    February 12
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    Beautiful and it flowed. Short and to the point to show someone how you feel. Blessings.


  • hamid
    February 12

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    Overall a nice poem i like it very much but could you please explain the word "irriplaceable." in line number three.
    BE HAPPY
    Ali