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~My Heart in Your Hands~

My heart is pounding
My eyes are crying
My mind is screaming
My spirits crushed

I know its not your fault
But its hard to watch you
walk out of my life
you meant the world to me
Your eyes so honest and deep
Your smile brought out the best in me
Your laugh warmed my heart
Your hugs calmed my crazy world

I want you
I need you
I loved you
I love you

Always and forever
no matter where you are
when you look up at a dark
night sky
gaze at the stars and think of me

Remember my smile
Remember my laugh
Remember only the good in me
and you will see that when you leave out
all the rest only my heart remains.

I'm placing my heart in your hands

Hoping and praying
this will help you to understand
This is my way of proving I love you

No matter where we are
our fates are merged as one
Two hearts, in one love

Two stars that share one sky
United by love and fate
two heart
one love
forever.

Author notes

No matter where you are I'll always love you.
Written for James

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  • Swimmin angel
    September 24

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    great write

    this is really good. i like it a lot and i know how it feels to have someone walk you of your life. i hope you two meet again someday