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~To Me You Are: To You I Am~

In my eyes you are a full moon,
lighting a perfect midnight sky.
The lightning dancing on a stormy night.
The sun bathing the earth in its gentle warmth.

To me you are the wind beneath my wings.
You help me to soar high above.
You are the antidote to even the Earth's darkest poisons.
You are the smile that brightens my day when
despair rears its dreary head.

To me you are a priority,
a need,
a dream,
a glint of hope.

To me you are love,
The smile on my lips.
The laughter in my lungs.
The warmth in my heart.
The strength to press on.
You are everything to me.

To you I am an option,
a choice,
a decision.
Someone who longs for your attention.

To you I am just another,
another girl,
another crush.

Just another girl who told you
she loves you.

To you I am or soon
will be simply
just another
memory.

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I'm in love with him.

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  • maggy1126
    February 12

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    wow... I know what you mean.. been there a few times my self... I love the way how you pieced everything together.. the way you descrived how he made you feel and then how low in his eyes you are.. it was amazing.. and true.. for a lot of people... Good job...