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Acclaiming






i

Many a shooting stars must have
descended as memorable orbs,
encapsulating and implementing notes
of people's inner aspirations.

                  Then they must have merged
                  in space's obscure unknowns ~

                  just as freedom fighters are
                  often unvalued by their fellow citizens
                  long after they dedicated their everything
                  for others' free tomorrows.






ii

Many a droplets
ambulate across water bodies,
nourishing and cleansing
like a dedicated caretaker.


                  And some individuals grow to be atheists,
                  ungrateful to God for His abundant blessings,
                  just as a son abandons his mother
                  after she's old and he's grown up.







iii

Many a bouquets must have
dried after absorbing smiles -
some true, some hypocritical.

                   
                        Unaffected by stinks, flowers inhale and live
                        a life scented by their inner aromas,
                        just as a person with
                        clean morals does.










Author notes

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  • Ithica silver member
    February 15

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    The depth of this write is so amazing. Such an incredible insight you have and you have layed it out for our enjoyment!!! Congrats. on the Gold!!!


  • penman gold member
    February 14
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • penman gold member
    February 13

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    Hello. Just a reminder. Please post your poem by tomorrow. All others are done and I plan on judging then. Thank you