And everybody looked into the circle
Wide eyed, they'd stared for days
The fire burning in the middle
In the center, they must play
Religiously devoted, following the recital
Blindly, they all act the right way
And in the comfort of the lies, you will
Notice everything seems to be okay
Each and every one are suicidal...
In fear, each of them shall pray
Controlled, not by self - but by bible
Each and every one will waste away
Burned into their brains, they gain a title
Taught to think for themselves? neigh
But if they were to do so, maybe they'd
realize thinking in this way is not okay
What did you think?
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Quite an interesting poem, very thought-provoking; the third stanza is the most powerful in this in my opinion.
Excellent poem - truly
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i liked this, it made me actually think.



