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A Place In Tir-na-n'Og

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Shari lei


She is the one, sent by those fairies in guise,
Her heart, they moulded from the imprints of their own,
And a mind that's made to wander, to do all things nice,
Reaching to the needy, be it known or unknown
In all, she was like a 'one from their clone'..

Love decks her eyes, borrowed from the beams of starlight
Emblazoned with primroses by the little sprite,
In Tir-na-n'Og, does she have a place tonight..



This was what my muse sang,
When she was back from her maunder
She said she saw those baby faeries
Rhyming in whispers low..
For that is how they often do
When they talk of humanfolks
And the nice little things they knew..


Author notes

I dint count my lines.. just wrote as my muse sang..

Btw.. Shari does deserve this.. Her latest campaign- helping the bushfire victims.. she seems to be always there at the time of need..

Shari.. Do keep the great job going..

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  • lunasongnightwolf
    June 10, 2009

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    omg! I love how you write!! It's as if you too are a faye! I love the imagery too!! I feel as if i'm witnessing these events, watching the fairies and sprites!

  • chloe715
    April 14, 2009

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    I really like it. You can so tell you worked really hard on it.


  • Desire gold member
    March 7, 2009

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    Precious!!

    Oh My Word this is a Beauty of a verse for a Beautiful Gem~ Love the images also energy and Love You have poured from Your quill~ Bravo!!

    Sorry it took me awhile to comment- I was offline for a bit still working through notes
    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    March 7, 2009

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    Thank You for Showing Love for Shari ~

    Absolutely beautiful

    What a majestic poem that just flowed forth in respect, love, beauty and soul-filled care

    ♥
    Thank You & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda

    • raspberry Greeters member
      March 9, 2009
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      Thanku much for the nice words Good u hosted this for her..


  • Shari-Lei gold member
    February 12, 2009

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    You are the most beautiful soul darling
    Thank you so much for making me smile, and always having the sweetest words



    Shari

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