Acts the lady, cold,
bound within her silken shell
her tears are real.
Author notes
You are a glutton for home work LOL ok....think I need to make this harder...so I want you togo find something in your house to personify in a haiku...can't be a live thing,must be an object inanimate...like cup saucer whatever...do it in a haiku and do it with metaphor and relate the last line of it to a human emotion it brings to you...such as : this paper bleeds ink
i hold the quill stemming it
running dry of thought
I am not specific with 5 7 5...even Basho said it's the shape of the haikku and the thought that matters, so as long as it is close to 5 7 5 I won't mind ok
I chose a nice little gold pin, that usually sits nestled in its box lined with silk. Most of the time I pretend it's not there.
Blah-fish - Constructive criticism is appreciated
Comments
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"her tears are real. "
Short.. but powerful
Great job.. nicely penned. ^^
-S!
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lol You do read my instructions don't you You did a wonderful job hun, very proud of you
C
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