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How now brown cow

The future is here!

it’s a wonderland

    possibilities

    potential

anything might happen

    nothing does

The future      is an eyeball

something shiny on TV
    to distract us

from the milking machines

what do yuo think?

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  • Bruce silver member
    February 12

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    I loved the last line! You'll pull us suddenly from the ethereal to the all too present reality of hum drum existence!