Long after the sun has laid to rest
the birds have gone to roost
and the last shooting star boost
I sit and sigh, Ive done my best.
you sigh sleeply in deep sleep
I wonder what your dreaming
somewhere far away its seeming
where pain has taken eternal leap
and calm and quiet is all you know
sometimes I long for you to be there
happy and free without any care
where the winds of fortune blow
still you stir and I smile
and although tired I am content
I think sometimes this life i was meant
and I think I'll stay with you a while
A contest entry
- Swift Rhymers by Ken-Maverick.
700 points, ended February 26, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Only for those who entered the last swift rhymers contest by Ken-Maverick.
650 points, ended February 26, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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JUDGED!!
This is really sweet,
wonderful rhyme and flow aswell! Well done poet
All the best to you in the contest
Ken -
Lovely!
Nice to read you again my dear sister, I wish you all the best within this contest, and I really enjoyed the new forms you're trying.
Bravo sweet soul! 
Keep up the wonderful works. 
Bro Timothy 
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Wow. This is really good, I'm not normally a fan of rhyming poems, but this stands out for me, I especially like the way you used the rhyme syllables
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Like this one
I enjoyed the pensiveness of the poem, very well written.
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