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bright vermillions born straight into the sun






















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~only what came to mind after going outside tonight at dusk to see the sun enveloping behind the mountain side.

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  • Rudy Ignatius
    February 13
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    I am sure there is some poet out there that has been quoted saying something like, "A poem doesn't have to be long to be deep." This makes me long for springtime just that much more. We've been having wonderfully warm days here lately, and this reminded me of that natural beauty. Your media are words!

    Brit


  • arafura gold member
    February 12
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    I love it!


  • Luciferschild
    February 12

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    interesting poem, imaginative and profound all in seven lonely words. Thank you for entering the contest