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Find Myself


I need to get myself together before it's to late1

my world is falling apart and into place2

I don't know what I am doing3

I must find out what it is4

The thing that is missing5

Something is making this world fall apart6

I need to save myself from desaster7

The nightmares I have every night won't leave me alone8

They are taking over my life and I need you to come save me9

My life is on the line and I can't fight this on my own10

I need someone to help fight this battle of suffering 11

Cause I cannot do it on my own12

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  • Vickie Rosa
    June 13

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    thaught pravoking

    Nice job, I relate to this one. Those nightmares
    can take over sometimes well put. sometimes we need help to save ourselves. good job as usual