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Looking at you


All day, you'll feel like someone's looking at you1

and part of the time, you'll be exactly right2

Cause he would look and stare but won't come up and say 'hi' 3

sometimes you have a werid feeling the he could be the missing peice4

but don't want to tell him that cause he might get the wrong impresstion 5

so you would just keep it to yourself hide all your feelings like they don't exsist6

when you see him you would be thinking7

'why am I feeling this way8

when I know you wouldn't feel the same'9

But your friendship will always mean a great deal to you 10

for you and him will be friends and just friends

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