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The Kiss of Love

To be awakened from this sleep,
and feel the warmth of the sun
upon my flesh.
Darkness
to long had consumed the soul,
hiding me from the sight of that
which I long for.
Embracing the wondrous joys
that can be felt,
the heart being lifted from
its frozen isolation - soaring high
to the heavens.
No such worries or doubts
do fill the mind,
feeling alive with renewed strength
once again.
And once it does start,
never shall these emotions end.
When it does start
with the tenderness
of love's kiss.

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