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That One First Kiss

That first kiss did she spark such a flame,
fire within so strong
as my heart came alive once again
craving the tenderness of her love.
Looking into her eyes
I could see such desire sparkling in them,
as my lips were intoxicated from her
never wanting to be removed.
Such a wondrous feeling burning within,
that which was thought to never happen again.
But here we are,
holding each other so close,
feeling our naked flesh pressed against one another
never wanting to let go.
Such passion we feel
as the touch of each other
excites us even more,
till finally
we drown within the sea of our love
sweetly enveloped within the tenderness
and enticed by the pleasures
of our love being expressed.
Limbs entwined,
bodies joined as one,
as we are enraptured by this fiery love
never wanting to slow down
never wanting for it to end.
For we know to well,
this is only the beginning
of something so wonderful and true.

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  • abybaby
    February 24

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    my brother.....u did a excellent job once again.....these words went right into my mind and are stored der forever.....i dnt need to save it or something cause it is registered with a permanent address right in der......tnx mate....cheers once again


  • hotchocolate gold member
    February 16
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    A wonderful sensual piece here that I enjoyed reading! Keep penning hon


  • ChelseySmile
    February 12
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    Please go back and read my rules.