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Long To Love You

I long to love you
the way my heart tells me to,
the way my lips and flesh yearn to do.
To make love to you,
touching you so gently
my lips kissing and tasting your flesh,
making you think that this all is a dream.
Letting you feel my fingers moving over your breasts,
as I kiss you so soft and tender.
Bringing about such affections
that we both yearn to feel.
I long to make love to you,
to feel our bodies join as one
as the friction between us
stimulates our senses.
Driving us forward
into a passionate ecstasy
building strong with each movement we make.
Filling us, thrilling us with such desire,
till we can no longer take it any more
and explode into the overwhelming rush of bliss.
I long to love you
this way and so many more,
just so I could feel the closeness
of your body next to mine,
your head resting on my chest as we fall asleep.

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  • geckogirl silver member
    February 12
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    a top sensual piece... you tok the prompt & ran with it... good luck


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 12

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    Very beautiful and filled with some lovely imagery. I love the thought that you put into this one. Well done and good luck to you here!




    Jeremy0826


  • abybaby
    February 12

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    MICHAEL my brother......you have created magic once again.....the words are chosen perfect......but i request you to please retouch the end......dont feel as good as your other works


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 11

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    WOW.
    Well done here poet, this one totally had me going awwwwwwwww.... simply beautiful.

    Thank you for your entry. Best wishes in all.

    Passions