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Titillate

I lie adrift

My tepid body casts shadows
To the essence of my soul

Energy erupts 

The glistening perspiration
The subtle glow
Illuminates the aura that engulfs me
I have lingered and longed
To achieve this incredible sense
The seduction claims its success

Author notes

My first bit of something erotic.

A contest entry

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  • musiccraze2009
    October 4
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    very tastefully done! good write!


  • individuality gold member
    August 24

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    a good poem, ah to finid those special moments in love that send us adrift on the ripples of pleasure and content emotions, to stare at the stars within the self and smile dreamily.


  • Lulu Gee silver member
    August 23
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    I think you've done very well.....I enjoyed your erotica very much....Lulu

  • abu nuwas
    August 7

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    Pure...

    in a funny sort of way. Well-written. You do not need the apostrophe at the end, unless you mean 'it is', which I do't think you do.


  • ladybug.
    June 23

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    I love that you left the words open to interpretation. The words you used are stunning; thank you for sharing ♥


  • Verdeboy
    June 13

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    Beautiful And Captivating

    This is very poetic and tastefully done...
    infinitely better than all the crude poems that are usually found in this category.
    Excellent job!


  • ajocean silver member
    May 13
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    nice piece

  • musiccraze2009
    March 20
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    very lovely open write. Leaves alot of interpretation up to the reader. Beautiful!


  • MichaelLeeSmyth
    March 3
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    Very nice...gives the ability to put so much of our own vision into as we read.
    Peace


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 12
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    I think that I just read this one. Did you repost it?


    • Bev Hilderman gold member
      February 13
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      did you repost it?

      Well may be lol......I'm having some trouble posting things I'm new to the computer as well as AP so cut and paste are forein to me. I'm sorry for any inconvenience. Thank for dropping in. I posted a poem with a very nice background but no words I could not find them . then I found them in edit and could not move them what a day!!!!!!!!!!!!! see you

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