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loving the world

Have you ever had a feeling where
Everything was beautiful?
Even the pain and misery
Of some situations?
Have you ever
Loved everything about someone?
Loved them in every way?
Did you ever hurt
Because they were hurting?
Cry because they were crying?
Smile because they were smiling?
In all of their strength, weakness,
And vulnerability
Did you love them so much
That you never wanted to leave?
That you didn't care how you existed in their life
Just as long as you could keep them safe?
It didn't matter did it?
All of the terrible aching inside
To be loved in return
It didn't matter
Because in those moments
When we're lost
In the way their hair falls
Or the way
Their eyes brush past us
We can't ask for more
Simply existing in the same world is enough
Feeling a love like that...

Is enough

Author notes

omfg, don't...
just read a story and it worked me up..sorry
blegh...
i couldn't help it
i swear to god, it was the story

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  • Atrophya
    February 15
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    okay.


  • Atrophya
    February 13
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    my poor girl =[


  • TheStupidLamb
    February 12
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    Good poem.


  • irish17crazy
    February 11
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    oh...and claps

  • irish17crazy
    February 11

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    come one, come all!!!!! *the essence of this beauty can merely fathom such an artistic masterpiece!* lol...not sure if that's the right way to put it ....lol...but I think it sticks....once again...like any other...a great write!!!!

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