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heaven...


I was born clung to comet trails 
plummeted through time
on meteor tails, a flare in sightless night;
a spark in a vast emptiness
danced so bright that even as fates
closed fingers to snuff out the light
in a distant somewhere  most giving eyes
within a greater reach
gained a smile, a nod of pleasing show
for the spirit of the tiny glow, infinitesimal
burst, virtual blink and gone
found a resonant thought of its existence
and in that peculiar way lived on
and on.


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  • just mercedes gold member
    February 23

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    this is a beautiful living spark, and it shines!

    we are all star dust, all flickers of the one flame. love this poem.


  • Mari Goes gold member
    February 12

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    All that light coming from a single sparkle, and living on forever...that is most definitely a wonderful thought!
    Heaven indeed