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Leaving for Good

What the hell did I do wrong this time?
Why would she do this to me?
Should go read the damn note,
just don't really want to...
guess I can't face it yet.

Screw her all to hell anyways.
  (he sobs)
What more could I have frigin' done?

I suppose it was all my fault
this time too.
Shit.
How the hell do I get through this?
Gotta' work all day tomorrow.
    (he sobs)
What do I do,
how do I go on without her?
I love her so frigin'  much.

Don't even want to go inside,
so lonely, liveless.

I think the house died too.

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  • Things never are the same when someone leaves us, but picking up the pieces and starting again...maybe what was destined to be...


  • penman gold member
    February 14
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    wonderful

    Very creative and well done. Best of luck in the contest.